Well, ya know. It's just a bit weird. First of all It takes 11 seconds to start, by which time I'm already bored. Then it has this weird out of time synth bit going on, which is not cricket. Who even plays a recorder these days? Theres no riffs either, I dont know what the story is with that, how can there be a song with no riffs? The bit with the piano just sounds old and gay. Please dont take offence, i'm just tryin to help but you should probably stop witing music to be honest. Jason, I think its ace really.