Dan G Posted March 17, 2005 Report Share Posted March 17, 2005 these are all parts of one big story. all very short I know' date=' but this is them. oh, and thats all of them.[b']The shortest distance between two points is zero.I remember how pale your face was when we first met. Your name anonymous as we twist our bodies into pieces of art. Sealed eyes and open mouths now tears of blood and serpent tongues.Heaven in the flesh.Stretching time over infinity, stretching skin into creases of joy,telling tales as we float along jawlines at break neck speeds. The hairs on your head coil round me, an embrace of death like freedom. Indulgence in your lips like a junkie on a fix, this is heaven in the flesh.Desperation smells of roses.she's turning four shades of red.her eyes tell stories in open verse.silence is golden and we're the wealthiest people on earth just now.we're watching silver linings on mushroom clouds.I'll start hearing when she stops breathing.Plagarism.My heart began to rot today. I'm never gonna get through this comedown. I fucking hate her.Fuck Empathy.She listens to rain-drops like screams from the fire. I saw thirteen different lines joint at angles representing her disfigured face. "I still bleed my orgasms nightly" she whispered. I felt her shattered skin again, 3 hours ago, and the taste buds on my tongue burn like acid.A spoonfull of sugar helps the medicine go down."you know, you always did look better when you smiled. lets not make this unpleasant, put on a smiley face. you used to like me looking at you naked. are my eyes different now? lets get under your skin and see if we find out why you did it. hold still. this is it. this is fucking it."Tragic love stories in the first person.Wearing each others skin to the wedding, we'll exchange vows and blood under an electric sun.Love never tasted so rotten. Now it is for all to see and fucking swallow. Lets make murder beautiful. very JR Hayes...It's funny, those lyrics are actually very emo in a twisted sort of way rather than a "oh no she broke my heart". that's not a diss, co I like them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teabags Posted March 17, 2005 Report Share Posted March 17, 2005 some fucker went and gave me a scene point for those. they're all about sex, fisting and murder. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan G Posted March 17, 2005 Report Share Posted March 17, 2005 I'm hiding under duvet with a tear in my eye,My daddy told me he was gonna sing a lullaby,Instead he took his pants off and said; "lets play a game""Stroke my pink pet python, son - Geoffrey is his name"I said I didn't want to, but my daddy looked upset,And then he forced my mouth upon his sweaty wrinkled pet,"I'm hiding Geoffrey in a cave, a moist and special place"But then he took it from my mouth and spurted on my face.The sticky mess went in my eyes for a second I went blind,And in that time geoffrey wiggled into my behind,My daddy said, "well taken son - tomorrow there'll be more"I don't know why he did this cos I'm nearly 34Oohhhhh....CHORUS:Sexy Grandpa! sexy grandpa! please leave me alone!Sexy Grandpa! sexy grandpa! he should be in a home![please note the alliteration in line 4] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gumpy Posted March 17, 2005 Report Share Posted March 17, 2005 Many times you've gone down on me,You've given me pleasure,Licking me and sucking me it's good, I know itYour fingers are wandering,To my tight little asshole,It shouldn't feel this good but it is forbidden pleasure, for me,It's so goodLick my balls,Your mouth - is openBringing me closer to the endCover your eyes I am about to blowWith the Cum that BlindsIt's coming fast, nothing can stop it nowIt's the Cum that Blinds...familiar anyone? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rachie Posted March 17, 2005 Report Share Posted March 17, 2005 We still need to finish that... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*Amy* Posted March 17, 2005 Report Share Posted March 17, 2005 Oh my lord, Dan I once started writing a song for Higher Music, but it was so bad I just stole some lyrics...I might try again some day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJ 10 Easy Wishes Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 He likes to go away - by me!He'd like to go away, somewhere where the sun stays out all dayhis collar's filled with sand and he eyes up all the ladies lying aroundG and T goes really fine, with all this red winehe tastes their lips and askwould you like to see my hotel room with me?I'll treat you like a regular queen, but there's so many to seeHe takes the drug you see and all this sex just can't be healthywell there's nothing quite so fine as the taste of new fleshthat's why he won't take her homeThe tale of Hamish McClure - by me!Hamish was sitting on his own in the caveeating soup, which was home madewhile swords and shields were being downedby a very, very, very, very young, young manno-one in the little village knew, or cared about his nameon all of the village pub walls was hamish in a framegreen eyes and lots of beer did meethe journeyed up the hill'hey hamish I'm going to kill you!''but i don't want to eat'doo doo it all againsometimes it feels like no one loves youwhen you're a very very very very young young manhe ran till he was safe again'oh no! what have i done?no one will think i am a hero unless this fight is won!'green eyes and lots of beer did meet as he journeyed up the hill'hey hamish i'm going to kill you - i'm going to make you dead!'and so he gobbled him up, biting bits off and chewing them upthe unknown hero never did get home. oh no.nice guy hamish just sitting, just sitting on his own,thinking of eating village humans - what is this feeling?its new to me, it's new to me,i'm so hungry, this is new to meit's new to me! it's new to me!it's new to me! i'm so hungry!i need to eatta daaaaaa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
french_disko Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 Many times you've gone down on me' date='You've given me pleasure,Licking me and sucking me it's good, I know itYour fingers are wandering,To my tight little asshole,It shouldn't feel this good but it is forbidden pleasure, for me,It's so goodLick my balls,Your mouth - is openBringing me closer to the endCover your eyes I am about to blowWith the Cum that BlindsIt's coming fast, nothing can stop it nowIt's the Cum that Blinds...familiar anyone?[/quote']Yeah, does your Dad sing that to your Mum? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blair Quik Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 The very first song I tried to write when I was about 15 was called Jack Orange, and I got this far:Jack Orange!Who the hell are you?What you gonna do?Do you think you're cool?before I decided to concentrate mt efforts on learning to play!My proudest moment would be "In Dreams":Drop poison in the sea of lifeShe crowds another dreamWhilst waiting for your nicotine to burnHeadlights are still shone on his faceAs he starts to eraseHis own fear of that time Forgotten....back of the lineIn darkness still waiting for him Somke on his face is wearing thinNow it's time for her emergeanceDon't close your eyes Cos it's too hard to say goodbyeFall from the skyDilluded second chanceAnd your dreams are hard enoughHard enough for everSo let the sunshine settle on my faceAnd your dreams are hard anoughHard enough for everIn time a long since past from hereThe smoke and darkness goneReplaced with images of smilingDon't close your eyesCo sit's too hard to say goodbyeFall from the skyDilluded second chance Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxton's Superb Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 you got about 4 lines too far with 'jack orange' im afraid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blair Quik Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 Mmmmm, think you could be right! Incidentally, my inspiration was from a guy I went to school with called Jack, who was ginger. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxton's Superb Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 this jack fello rubbed you the wrong way didnt he? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blair Quik Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 Not at all actually, we were actually mates! I was just listening to Green Day religiously (proper Green Day-the old stuff) and wanted to be an angsty teenager with three power chords and a bratty mouth! Sadly it didn't really work.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laxton's Superb Posted March 18, 2005 Report Share Posted March 18, 2005 im sure that standard of lyric is rife in Greendays material, should have stuck at it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rachie Posted March 19, 2005 Report Share Posted March 19, 2005 Yeah' date=' does your Dad sing that to your Mum?[/quote']If his dad's in a local metal band maybe... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gumpy Posted March 20, 2005 Report Share Posted March 20, 2005 Yeah' date=' does your Dad sing that to your Mum?[/quote']i wish i was as cool as you..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leftboy Posted March 24, 2005 Report Share Posted March 24, 2005 ThrillerI'm Michael Jackson, I like getting downI'm the King of Pop, I wear the crownI'm a smooth criminal, hear me y'allWatch me dance, you hear the call?Do the moonwalk, that's real fineFiddling with kids is where I draw the lineFriends with Bubbles, he my chimpWears a mask because he's a gimpDoin' my music, I'm a hip writerBelieve you me I'm a lover not a fighter"Off The Wall", "Thriller" and "Bad"Damn good albums, make me feel gladI was "Dangerous", and now "Invincible"Tellin you now this King will never fallArtist of the Millenium, can't you see - I'm full of SHAMON... EEEH! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mmw Posted March 31, 2005 Report Share Posted March 31, 2005 You think its coincidence that lust is an anagram of slut, you lying fuck. Take the mask off your eyes and show the world youre a cheat. There are no lucky punches in this life anymore; Im fed up rolling for double sixes and walking away with less that three. In a black and white world, you make me see red. Like a card shark about to lay the winning card, youre cool and youre calculated, but Im the chocolate on the razorblade and youve got the sweet tooth. Youre the abortion in my life. It seems the straight edge bends in the sun. Tact is for the weak, Ill spell it out, your outlook is bleak. Youre not the lump in my throat or the knot in my stomach; youre the glint in my eye that provokes the first strike. When all is said and done, Ill live my life by the rules that I write Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AmbientMood Posted March 31, 2005 Report Share Posted March 31, 2005 You've took them out of contxt you cunt....I'll use some formatting hereMaybe its just me but I just don't see how good heroin could ever be except for ruining your lifeYou know the risks so don't be so thick' date=' if you're dumb enough to take that shit maybe you deserve to dieBesides...who says poetry has to rhyme??Terribly sorry old boy, the intended criticism was of your rythm, not yo rhyme.A simple mistake on my part that had drastic effect, much like The Somme. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
threeornothing Posted March 31, 2005 Report Share Posted March 31, 2005 Guess you need to hear the song to get it (it works fine) but hey...I was 15 and full of dumb ideas at the time, and easily impressed by the sort of stuff 10 year olds would be Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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