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not me best and not me worse but i like this one...

Slippery road the Technicolor dream

Things are never quite what they seem

Lets take a trip and guide up to the sky

And eat worms and strawberry pie

All the birds they mellow in the sand

Listening to the magical band

And all the players they are cast in gold

Yes this could be your magic world

This is a rave

This is a rave

Anything you want could happen here

Drink your cigarettes and then smoke your beer

And goblins they will eat you in a tiff

Keep them happy by giving them a spliff

Take another trip see what then is done

Flying over the land above the sun

Moonbeams pasture across the dusty moor

Selling tablets to the needy and the poor

This is a rave

This is a rave

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Guest stuartmaxwell
To the tune of "I Predict a Riot"

Oooh' date=' go on a night out with Maxi

Everyone tries to attack me

They say "that's for heckling at me

And pretending your guts are on fire-ee"[/quote']

im touched dave, honestly.

lyrics wise

"we cant keep on running away from the truth, as the world is not big enough, we only carried out the orders, yet our conscience is as dirty as the presents they send"

from a song about the guys who dropped on hiroshima

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not me best and not me worse but i like this one...

Slippery road the Technicolor dream

Things are never quite what they seem

Lets take a trip and guide up to the sky

And eat worms and strawberry pie

All the birds they mellow in the sand

Listening to the magical band

And all the players they are cast in gold

Yes this could be your magic world

This is a rave

This is a rave

Anything you want could happen here

Drink your cigarettes and then smoke your beer

And goblins they will eat you in a tiff

Keep them happy by giving them a spliff

Take another trip see what then is done

Flying over the land above the sun

Moonbeams pasture across the dusty moor

Selling tablets to the needy and the poor

This is a rave

This is a rave

i've many people at raves who were off their face on acid and selling pills too.

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Ewe Peeple

Ewe Peeple will be dominated

by the ones who make a stand

Ewe havent the guts

The will or the backbone

To take each other

By the hand

Dont be fooled by the tyrant

Just look to your fellow man

Lead the whole world on together

Then we'll find the promised land

Copyright res. PM

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This caused much controversy in my youth (was 15 when I penned this) just came up with all the rhymings on the way to school one morning :D Dead chuffed. The recording of this song is so bad that I won't post it here...unless we ever re-record...

DESERVE TO DIE? (note the question mark, we're not pro-death!! :D)

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Copyleft 1998 Keilan Knight - FCD records

Needle in your vein, say its to keep you sane,

Drug dealers gain, out of your pain,

Heat up the shit, inject it,

Once is not enough, you need another hit.

You need more and more, another 'druggy bore',

Fucking that needle in your arm, isn't that sore,

If thats what you want to do, fine its up to you,

But keep that shit away from me, Don't wanna end up like you.

Maybe its just me, but I just don't see,

How good heroin could ever be, except for ruining your life,

You know the risks, so don't be so thick,

If you're dumb enough to take that shit, maybe you deserve to die.

It costs lots of money, for you to score more gear,

You steal, cheat and lie to pay for that shit you hold so dear,

Steal from the poor, steal from your friends,

Stealing to pay for shit which drives you round the fucking bend.

The risks are Aids or even death, is that really worth the price?

The next hit could be the lethal injection that takes your life,

Smokin' isn't any better, because the outcome is still the same,

But the dealers couldn't give a shit, they've got it fucking made!

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"it was a snowy day

chris and his friends came out to play

they tried to attack me and my friends

but we kicked their holes and ate their bell ends"

do not worry, i do realise the lyrics are neither good or funny but they mean a lot to me, shaun f, matthEw and adam.s

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Are you proud of these?!?

Maybe its just me' date=' but I just don't see,

How good heroin could ever be, except for ruining your life,

It costs lots of money, for you to score more gear,

You steal, cheat and lie to pay for that shit you hold so dear,[/quote']

Paid too much attention to too many tutor videos. Has as much rhyme as lyrics I had to write in Primary three over why we should eat more vegetables.

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He's like a lamb, in the skin of a lion

Looking really tough but inside he's crying

A 5 star show that everyones buying

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The tally on the wall's readin 68 nights

She'd give up one lung just to feel some moonlight

She's been confined with her looks as a crime

Another small part in this guys twisted design.

Every single wish is granted by this man

'cept freedom cos the key is in his hands

He's not a necro and he's not after sex

All he really wants is some love and respect

She sends him to the shop to buy some 'essentials'

Diggin for her life with some kitchen utensils

She hits a rock, she gives up all hope

Ends her life with a metre of home made rope.

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Hmm, lemme think...

You cut yourself, on your shattered dreams.

I'm the one, who brought you to your knees.

and your heart is breaking, breaking at the seams,

so I gotta let you know, she meant nothing to me.

okay that was crap.

how about...

You're too late, it's over that's right!

me and you just didn't work.

you're mom called me up last night,

asked me if we could fuck.

I said yeah, I should have really said no,

you're obviously not the only ho!

haha! Hmm...

It's death that will be the only escape,

from all of your torture and all of your rape.

Tonight daddy, it's you or me,

I'll close my eyes, and count to 3.

It's closing time, you're on your way back,

I've got my knife ready for the attack.

The key in door means it's getting much nearer,

the rest of my life becoming more clearer.

Footsteps I hear, I know them so well,

in a few moments you're going to hell.

The door handle turns, the time is nigh,

I still feel your finger tips on my thigh.

The door swings open, I can smell your breath,

come closer daddy, face to face with death.

This is it now, the moment has come,

all of your sins become undone.

You stumble forwards, and sit on my bed,

I pull out my knife, and aim for your head.

I stab out your eyes, you fall to the floor,

the blood flows out, this sight I adore.

It's not enough though, you're still alive,

I hear your shocking screams of surprise.

I jump off the bed, and bury the knife,

I bet now you wish you'd have thought twice.

Your body lays still, no longer moving,

the lack of your breath just feels so soothing.

I pull out the knife, it's covered in you,

it's finally over, I've won, you're through!

wow, that was rather graphic. The things your mind thinks of when it's after midnight...

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Paid too much attention to too many tutor videos. Has as much rhyme as lyrics I had to write in Primary three over why we should eat more vegetables.

You've took them out of contxt you cunt....I'll use some formatting here

Maybe its just me but I just don't see how good heroin could ever be except for ruining your life

You know the risks so don't be so thick' date=' if you're dumb enough to take that shit maybe you deserve to die

Besides...who says poetry has to rhyme??

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Favourite lyrics what i wrote

I kinda like this one:

Follow you own path,

Dont stray in search of pots of gold

If you have all the wealth,

but not yourself,

you really have nothing at all

I like this more (but it makes me seem really anxty):

Staring out across the grey bleak skyline,

There must be more than this,

Preparation for a menial existence,

An office job, a suit, a family car,

Forced into a cab,

Taxi driver given directions to somebody elses dream.

This one i like because theres a subtle repetition of theme:

Originality brought up before the court,

Evidence called is your attention to similarity,

A thousand manikins march on our high streets,

Parading to the beat of the corporate machine,

Exploited workers fashion your new season design,

Consumer exploited as a living advertisement,

Dont be controlled by a label or a magazine,

Stand out from the banality of normality,

You want to know how i differ from the masses,

I skip a beat to stay out of line.

but for some reason this is my favourite:

You conform you just dont know it,

By standing out you merge in,

If you rise up attempting to look down on the conventional,

And your head pops out above the clouds,

Youll see a million other non-conformers,

Staring straight back at you.

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You've took them out of contxt you cunt....I'll use some formatting here

Maybe its just me but I just don't see how good heroin could ever be except for ruining your life

You know the risks so don't be so thick' date=' if you're dumb enough to take that shit maybe you deserve to die

Besides...who says poetry has to rhyme??

But techically 'risk', 'shit' and 'thick' don't rhmye.

Neither does 'die' and 'life'.

However smackheads are rubbish so I'd award you a scene point if I had any left to give out today :up:

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these are all parts of one big story. all very short I know, but this is them. oh, and thats all of them.

The shortest distance between two points is zero.

I remember how pale your face was when we first met. Your name anonymous as we twist our bodies into pieces of art. Sealed eyes and open mouths now tears of blood and serpent tongues.

Heaven in the flesh.

Stretching time over infinity, stretching skin into creases of joy,telling tales as we float along jawlines at break neck speeds. The hairs on your head coil round me, an embrace of death like freedom. Indulgence in your lips like a junkie on a fix, this is heaven in the flesh.

Desperation smells of roses.

she's turning four shades of red.her eyes tell stories in open verse.silence is golden and we're the wealthiest people on earth just now.we're watching silver linings on mushroom clouds.I'll start hearing when she stops breathing.

Plagarism.

My heart began to rot today. I'm never gonna get through this comedown. I fucking hate her.

Fuck Empathy.

She listens to rain-drops like screams from the fire. I saw thirteen different lines joint at angles representing her disfigured face. "I still bleed my orgasms nightly" she whispered. I felt her shattered skin again, 3 hours ago, and the taste buds on my tongue burn like acid.

A spoonfull of sugar helps the medicine go down.

"you know, you always did look better when you smiled. lets not make this unpleasant, put on a smiley face. you used to like me looking at you naked. are my eyes different now? lets get under your skin and see if we find out why you did it. hold still. this is it. this is fucking it."

Tragic love stories in the first person.

Wearing each others skin to the wedding, we'll exchange vows and blood under an electric sun.Love never tasted so rotten. Now it is for all to see and fucking swallow. Lets make murder beautiful.

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here are some lyrics I just came up with:

You come into my room,

You clean up all my shit,

You use your mop and broom,

I really think you're fit.

Your ass is rather saggy,

Your tits droop like a sock,

I'm glad my shorts are baggy,

You can't see my hard cock.

I haven't seen your fanny yet

But I'd give it some inspection

If you come a little closer granny

And sit on my erection

CHORUS:

Sexy gran! sexy gran! come and sit on me!

Sexy gran! sexy gran! you're almost 93!

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