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monkey fucksh*t lyrics, feedback required!!!


steve corps

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here are a sample of lyrics from my next recording, under the name pesthole.i'd call this hostile scottish electronics, and its not going to be nice.

"chitter, chatter, chatter, chitter

monkey fuckshit on the shitter

softly peeling catchee monkey

chitter, chatter, chitter

fuckshit smearing on the shitter

convulsion

fuckshit rabid convulsion"

this track is about 45 seconds long and sounds like a cross between sutcliffe jugend, bad uplifting techno and bomfunk mc skillz.i shit you not.

tracks not finished yet but do you think you'd like it on paper at least? honest comments only.

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reminds me on a song i wrote called "i went round to mr t's to make some shortbread but i got more than i bargained for"

but from what im guessing in 45 seconds and the style of the stuff i heard on your soundclick account

it really doesnt matter eh?

werewolf corps mp3s

better than soundclick, which i forgot i had.the moral of the story is dont go round to mr.t's.

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here are a sample of lyrics from my next recording' date=' under the name pesthole.i'd call this hostile scottish electronics, and its not going to be nice.

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Yeah you are right, it's not nice - I'm trying hard to think of something positive to say about this, but in all honesty, it's just pointless, talentless, irritating, inane drivel that left me thinking "so what?"

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"chitter' date=' chatter, chatter, chitter

monkey fuckshit on the shitter

softly peeling catchee monkey

chitter, chatter, chitter

fuckshit smearing on the shitter

convulsion

fuckshit rabid convulsion"

[/quote']

It sounds like a computer game thats been slowed down and played through broken speakers.

I think you might want to make the lyrics a little less shitty. Sounds like something an 8 year old would say. But thats up to you I guess.

(Not Birdman)

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I think the lyrics suit the music, not my personal favorite direction for lyrics to take but that's only personal preference. To be honest when listening to this song I probably wouldn't pay attention to the lyrics anyway as the sounds pretty much drown them out kind of rendering them obsolete.

This probibly isn't very helpful feedback, but yeah.

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heh, when i posted this thread it was a minor pisstake of people putting posts up of lyrics for feedback, as if someone saying your own personal lyrics you've worked hard at sucked would make you change them! pesthole lyrics are a world apart from stuff i've written for bodies/ruptured spleen/werewolf corps, wanted to do something crammed full of in-jokes i share with mates, purile taunts and childish comments about spitting and ropey porno movies.wanted a break from trawling the depths of suffering and killings!

some more, enjoy!

PISS FREAKS

you

yeah you in the stripped top

come on, its a hot salty piss orgy

like a picnic minus the food

a urine picnic

you're in a urine picnic

oh yeah

TEENAGE DOG ORGY

that looks fucking sickening

is he your boyfriend?

is that his large dog?

nice yellow retro adidas top

you'd look ok if you werent sucking an animals cock

is that semen or piss?

music soonish.

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