KimyReizeger Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Wouldn't mind some thoughts on this track as, by God, I'm nowhere near finished with it!no more war re-mixMySpace.com - KimyReizeger - Aberdeen, UK - Electronica / Experimental / Jazz - www.myspace.com/kimyreizeger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest idol_wild Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Sadly, my internet at home is unavailable right now but as soon as it's back up, I shall listen with intent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheTickingTime-Bomb Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Yo.I like it, but definitely room for improvement.'Really like those synths that take over now and again; maybe a breakdown section with just those?Bass is awesome, as is the bass drum and snare.The bit where the synths and singing cut out like a strobe before the instrumental section and then onto the bit around 2:14 - 2:22 is the best bit for me. Percussion is all good. Not so mad on the vocal track, but that is mostly due to the monotone styling of the artist and not your treatment of it which is good, but could maybe be glitchier.You kept it quite consistent and it has a nice ending.Look forward to MK2. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KimyReizeger Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Yo.I like it, but definitely room for improvement.'Really like those synths that take over now and again; maybe a breakdown section with just those?Bass is awesome, as is the bass drum and snare.The bit where the synths and singing cut out like a strobe before the instrumental section and then onto the bit around 2:14 - 2:22 is the best bit for me. Percussion is all good. Not so mad on the vocal track, but that is mostly due to the monotone styling of the artist and not your treatment of it which is good, but could maybe be glitchier.You kept it quite consistent and it has a nice ending.Look forward to MK2.Cheers for listening There will be more versions to come of this one I think. Vocals will definately be getting a makeover of some kind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottyboy Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 i also like it, although its not quite as good as the other stuff; no clue how to go about improving it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KimyReizeger Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 i also like it, although its not quite as good as the other stuff; Hey there, intriguing opinion..cheers!no clue how to go about improving itDuck noises in the background is my first thought. Farmyard noises are yet to reach full potential in electronic music.Anyone else? Song / agricultural-based comments equally acceptable. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeaOfEnergy Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 needs a new title(helpful comment that isnt it.......) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottyboy Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Hey there, intriguing opinion..cheers!i downloaded 'drenched in power' and xaaxax (roughly the titles...) a while ago and really liked them Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KimyReizeger Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 i downloaded 'drenched in power' and xaaxax (roughly the titles...) a while ago and really liked them I always thought you had great taste in music Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KimyReizeger Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 needs a new titleYeah, 'Blitzkrieg' was my other idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 yo. i dig the sounds and layering and whatnot - i reckon you could expand the bar by bar dynamics into the overall tune's structure(-sounds a bit copyandpaste atmimho). or not, as i have a short attention span for this kinda stuff unless I'm getting my groove on (which I would. natch). I reckon a kemnay electronic gig down the burnett's in order. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KimyReizeger Posted February 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 i reckon you could expand the bar by bar dynamics into the overall tune's structure(-sounds a bit copyandpaste atmimhoYeah, I completely understand that. I will probably seek to ammend this in the next burst of inspiration. The feedback is great btw guys - taking it all in!I reckon a kemnay electronic gig down the burnett's in orderKemnay has strong links with the electronic world. It's a little known fact, but half of Kraftwerk were born here. I had made a vow of silence on the subject, but that kind of knowledge weighs hell on a man's mind... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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