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    New project

    Alright Chris, hope you've been well. Cheers for the feedback. I see what you mean about the end it's played to a metronome but it still doesn't quite sound right. I think i need to make the start of the song a bit more eventful aswell.
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    New project

    I messed up the link. The working link is: This Odd Mechanism - Tracks - SoundCloud
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    New project

    I've started a new project and I'm looking for feedback. http:soundcloud.com/this-odd-mechanism Let me know what you think.
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    New track StaleMusic - Don't Lose Me

    Overall I would say it could be improved. The piano hook contrasts quite well with the aggressive drums and bass and it's nice to hear a dubstep song in a major key. But the song feels like it needs an extra part like a breakdown or bridge. When the distorted bass kicked in the second time round I felt a little underwhelmed. A good song but in my opinion it could be better.
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    New Song, what do you think?

    I quite liked it. I have to agree with Nefarious C. Some of the lyrics are good but some of them seem a bit too sickly for my liking. The song overall seems tight and the singing is very good.
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    New tune

    Cheers guys. Can anyone give me any specific criticisms. The song still doesn't quite feel right to me. I know next to nothing about recording and production. So any tips would be appreciated.
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    Curators album preview...

    Sounding good. I don't know why but the production reminds me of the Manic Street Preachers.
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    New tune

    Hi, Just put a new tune up, it's a bit rough. I'm looking for feedback, so I can make some improvements on it. Bones Phonetic on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads
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    A new shoegaze/electro band :P

    'Kindness' sounds like someone has taken The Horrors song 'Sea within a Sea' and put all the instruments at different pitches and tempos. Utter Pish.
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    Three Knots New Band

    Sounding good. I liked French Microwaves the most.
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    New Headlight Song

    I'll be honest, I wasn't really into the old stuff. But I really like this. The song grabbed my attention and is quite epic sounding (both instrument and lyrics wise) without being bombastic or bloated.
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    Guitarist or bass player seeks band!

    PM'd you Cheers Paul
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    'thinkofanamelater' has some good ideas in it but the drums sound a bit weak at parts. The last two minutes of the song seemed unnecessary to me. I prefered 'a beautiful dress' the start and the end are really good (some bits in the middle are too glitchy for me). 'Finishthis' seems more like a single idea expanded on, which I prefer to randomness.
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    Musicians wanted to start band

    PM'd you Cheers
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    Looking to join/form a band

    Bump, we've got a drummer on board now. We're still interested in hearing from vocalists and any other musicians.