Moon Moon Posted January 1, 2014 Report Share Posted January 1, 2014 (edited) starting my own wee composition project got the kinda rhythm to it going so far just wanted comments and suggestions, i know the quality is terrible and i hope to use my other acoustic next time as the one i used the action was too high there fore theres a few bumb notes. this is just the main instrument i hope to add bass maybe a minor drum part with a few modications, a guitar to play a melody and possibly a violin. just a rough idea ive been toying about with for the last month https://soundcloud.com/joss-rhynd/sounds-from-wednesday P.S it was recorded on my i phone Edited January 1, 2014 by YoungA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyin Ryan Posted January 1, 2014 Report Share Posted January 1, 2014 Well done, good melodic feel about it, stick in with developing it. I didnt like the follow on track... fingers down the throat.... boyfriend anyway... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Moon Posted January 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2014 Yeh it was a bit random in some parts if not all parts needs some structure to it cheers though, going to take a while as since it's open tuning it's hard to find a bass line that's fits in with chords I made up and may change the rythym so drums fit in too thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Moon Posted January 3, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2014 https://soundcloud.com/joss-rhynd/sounds-from-friday-afternoon had another go at this today, tried finger picking instead and its a little more organised, let me know what yous think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Moon Posted January 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2014 Ok me and my mate are going to try come up with some lyrics with In the next while we're going with the second version also Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oedo 808 Posted January 9, 2014 Report Share Posted January 9, 2014 My advice is to finish something and ask for opinions then. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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