Stroopy121 Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 We've got one acoustic and one full band demo up on soundcloud here if y'all could give them a listen and post some feedback it'd be appreciated.Be gentle xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stroopy121 Posted March 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 Not this gentle..xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FatHand Posted March 15, 2011 Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 Vocals are not great in the first one. Acoustic track is a bit better. I just feel like I've heard this kind of thing thousands of times before. I'm being pretty harsh really. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oedo 808 Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 At least you're trying to be melodic. You need to tighten up and sing a few more correct notes.I mean, being objective, what do you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stroopy121 Posted March 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Yeah the vocals are far from perfect. The harmonies need a tweak and the whole thing needs a good once over in that respect. My singing is improving vastly but it's still far enough out to be the weakest point of it all IMO.What about the music to it? Dull? Interesting? Overdone? Personally I like the punk rock meets an almost country feel in Old Sac, was going for that Frank Turner-esque balance only without the acoustic guitar.And also, the drums in that track are done with reaper trigger and samples, is it obvious to hear or is it something you don't really notice until you're told? IMO they sound pretty good but the cymbals sound a little weak.I'm very happy with the lyrics and melodies (although they are sung rather poorly), especially to Punk By Numbers, but that's likely a slanted opinion...Any more opinions?xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
captain burrito Posted March 21, 2011 Report Share Posted March 21, 2011 Woah on the woah's in the first track. Gets boring really fast.TBH, the songs seem very average. You sound like the sorta band that'd be on first at Drummonds on a school night. The lead part in the first song was pretty good, but like I said the woah's spoil it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stroopy121 Posted March 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 The woahs on the acoustic track or the full band one?please don't say both.xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oedo 808 Posted March 22, 2011 Report Share Posted March 22, 2011 the woah's spoil it.I disagree. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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