Yeah, I don't get the impression from your other posts, that you 'don't know what you're doing', at all. You seemed adamant that what you do, is far better than anything anyone else does, or wants to do. Anyway, as for the track - I found it boring. It's not my kinda thing, so I dunno what you're trying to achieve with it, but I kept expecting it to kick off at some point, and it didn't. I also think there was the lack of a hook - something that will make the listener remember the song. Hope that helps...