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Alright Chris, hope you've been well. Cheers for the feedback. I see what you mean about the end it's played to a metronome but it still doesn't quite sound right. I think i need to make the start of the song a bit more eventful aswell.

I messed up the link.

The working link is:

This Odd Mechanism - Tracks - SoundCloud

I've started a new project and I'm looking for feedback.

http:soundcloud.com/this-odd-mechanism

Let me know what you think.

Overall I would say it could be improved. The piano hook contrasts quite well with the aggressive drums and bass and it's nice to hear a dubstep song in a major key. But the song feels like it needs an extra part like a breakdown or bridge. When the distorted bass kicked in the second time round I felt a little underwhelmed. A good song but in my opinion it could be better.

I quite liked it. I have to agree with Nefarious C. Some of the lyrics are good but some of them seem a bit too sickly for my liking. The song overall seems tight and the singing is very good.

Cheers guys. Can anyone give me any specific criticisms. The song still doesn't quite feel right to me. I know next to nothing about recording and production. So any tips would be appreciated.

Sounding good. I don't know why but the production reminds me of the Manic Street Preachers.

Hi,

Just put a new tune up, it's a bit rough. I'm looking for feedback, so I can make some improvements on it.

Bones Phonetic on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads

'Kindness' sounds like someone has taken The Horrors song 'Sea within a Sea' and put all the instruments at different pitches and tempos. Utter Pish.

Sounding good. I liked French Microwaves the most.

I'll be honest, I wasn't really into the old stuff. But I really like this. The song grabbed my attention and is quite epic sounding (both instrument and lyrics wise) without being bombastic or bloated.

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Paul

'thinkofanamelater' has some good ideas in it but the drums sound a bit weak at parts. The last two minutes of the song seemed unnecessary to me. I prefered 'a beautiful dress' the start and the end are really good (some bits in the middle are too glitchy for me). 'Finishthis' seems more like a single idea expanded on, which I prefer to randomness.

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Bump, we've got a drummer on board now. We're still interested in hearing from vocalists and any other musicians.

bump, I should probably mention I play bass, keys, laptop and attempted singing. My mate mainly plays guitar and keys. So we're mainly looking for a drummer and vocalists but another guitarist, bassist or key/synth player would be a bonus.

Hi,

Me and a friend of mine are looking to get a band on the go. We're looking for musicians of any description. We've got a few rough demos on myspace.

Bones Phonetic on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads

You can find our influences on the myspace. Not really sure what sort of music we want to make. To be honest I don't think the tunes we've got up are anything special, but it's just a starting point. Ideally I would like to get a band together where everyone contributes to writing.

Contact me here, if your interested.

Cheers

Paul

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Paul

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Paul

Hi sounds like something I might be up for. I've got a couple of songs on myspace that me and a friend have made. They don't having singing on them yet but I've been learning to sing over the last couple of months.

Bones Phonetic on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads

If you like what you hear then PM me and we could arrange a jam.

Cheers

Paul

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Hi, we're looking for a drummer and any other like minded musicians. We've got a few songs up here: Bones Phonetic on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads. Ideally we're looking for a drummer to play in conjunction with programmed drums and an extra guitarist/singer/bassist/synth player etc. wouldn't go a miss.

PM me if your interested.

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Paul

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We're looking for a keyboard player. We've already written keyboard parts to some of our songs but we would prefer someone who could make up their own stuff. We already own two good quality keyboards, so in terms of equipment all you would need is something to practise on.

We've a handful of songs written at the moment. Our style is a mix of alt.rock, funk and a bit prog at times. Ideally we're looking for someone to play piano, organ etc. for some songs and something more electronic for other songs. We're not fussy about how good you are as long as you've got a basic knowledge of how to play.

Are influences are: At the drive-in, Biffy Clyro, Beck, Chemical Brothers, Cribs, Daft Punk, David Bowie, DJ Shadow, Errors, Foals, Faithless, Frank Zappa, Gang of four, Groundhogs, Hawkwind, Idlewild, Justice, Kings of Leon, Led Zeppelin, Late of the Pier, MGMT, Muse, Pepe Deluxe, Primus, Pink Floyd, Radiohead, RATM, RHCP, Sly and the Family Stone, Talking Heads, Television, The Clash, The Cure, The Klaxons, The Mars Volta, The Smiths, The Whitest Boy Alive, Tom Vek, Unkle, Yeah Yeah Yeahs and Yes.

If your intrested PM me.

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