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A little while ago i was thinking it through in my head, and i thought maybe spoken kinda whispery vocals, not rap if you know what i mean. That's for the verse. And perhaps It may be possible to have harmony through the chorus, just to back it up more.

Ok, I have been working on this for a couple of days. I've had the same notes and rythms since day one, but there were mistakes all over the place, and in the piano part there still are.

Some of the EQ may be well out in places, and general sound volumes, but i haven't really had the time to fiddle with all of that stuff.

I played in every intrument, apart from the drums, which came from hydrogen (what a great program).

Let me know what you think!

http://fsphost.com/illusione/funk%20mobile.mp3

Oh and by the way, there is plans to put in vocals, but i haven't come up with lyrics.

Also, the name of the song is just something i thought of when i was coming to save the song.

I'm only listening through speakers, because my headphones won't quite reach the back of the pc.

None the less, i can't hear any bad quality through them.

And yes, vocals would definatly give the song definition, so as it has been stated, be good to choose wisely.

I like the fact that they're using modern effects in there. Also, it's good that they're not over complicating things. I can see them going down quite well.

Odd, it works fine now? Must have been because the server wasn't quite ready.

The site seems to be a dud, doesn't work!

Hey thanks for the link! They made a windows version i noticed, so i'm gonna try it out now. It was only released like last month.

Would it have sounded bad to put the les paul through the boss (i'm assuming it's a multi effects pedal) and just turned it to acoustic? It sounds good anyway the way you did it!

I like the song, and can see the lyrics just adding to it in the right way. It's been done very well, do you have all the equipment, ie the drums, bass and guitar? and all the recording stuff?

I used sibelius to put it in, and as you say, i don't have a keyboard, or at least i don't have the cable to put the keyboard in...So if i thought about it i could get the keyboard to work, but i haven't bothered. Anyway, yeah...I haven't quite got round to changing the dynamics yet, but it wouldn't take long to put into it.

Ok, i have taken a controversal change to the middle of the song, to really bring out some contrast. I'm not quite sure myself about it, and it is very possible that it just doesn't fit.

http://one.fsphost.com/illusione/compare1.mid

Thanks for the quick reply by the way.

Hi all,

I just wanted to get peoples opinions on this song. unfortunatly, it is in midi, but it would have to be a bigger file size if i put it to mp3.

I have only worked on it for around 2 hours, so obviously there is much time for improvements!

Link:http://one.fsphost.com/illusione/compare.mid

Paul