feedback please

[KimyReizeger]

Wouldn't mind some thoughts on this track as, by God, I'm nowhere near finished with it!

no more war re-mix

MySpace.com - KimyReizeger - Aberdeen, UK - Electronica / Experimental / Jazz - www.myspace.com/kimyreizeger

[idol_wild]

Sadly, my internet at home is unavailable right now but as soon as it's back up, I shall listen with intent.

[TheTickingTime-Bomb]

Yo.

I like it, but definitely room for improvement.

'Really like those synths that take over now and again; maybe a breakdown section with just those?

Bass is awesome, as is the bass drum and snare.

The bit where the synths and singing cut out like a strobe before the instrumental section and then onto the bit around 2:14 - 2:22 is the best bit for me.

Percussion is all good. Not so mad on the vocal track, but that is mostly due to the monotone styling of the artist and not your treatment of it which is good, but could maybe be glitchier.

You kept it quite consistent and it has a nice ending.

Look forward to MK2.

[KimyReizeger]

Originally Posted by TheTickingTime-Bomb

Yo.

I like it, but definitely room for improvement.

'Really like those synths that take over now and again; maybe a breakdown section with just those?

Bass is awesome, as is the bass drum and snare.

The bit where the synths and singing cut out like a strobe before the instrumental section and then onto the bit around 2:14 - 2:22 is the best bit for me.

Percussion is all good. Not so mad on the vocal track, but that is mostly due to the monotone styling of the artist and not your treatment of it which is good, but could maybe be glitchier.

You kept it quite consistent and it has a nice ending.

Look forward to MK2.

Cheers for listening There will be more versions to come of this one I think. Vocals will definately be getting a makeover of some kind.

[scottyboy]

i also like it, although its not quite as good as the other stuff; no clue how to go about improving it

[KimyReizeger]

Originally Posted by scottyboy

i also like it, although its not quite as good as the other stuff;

Hey there, intriguing opinion..cheers!

no clue how to go about improving it

Duck noises in the background is my first thought. Farmyard noises are yet to reach full potential in electronic music.

Anyone else? Song / agricultural-based comments equally acceptable.

[CRANIAL_MIND]

needs a new title



(helpful comment that isnt it.......)

[scottyboy]

Originally Posted by KimyReizeger

Hey there, intriguing opinion..cheers!

i downloaded 'drenched in power' and xaaxax (roughly the titles...) a while ago and really liked them

[KimyReizeger]

Originally Posted by scottyboy

i downloaded 'drenched in power' and xaaxax (roughly the titles...) a while ago and really liked them

I always thought you had great taste in music

[KimyReizeger]

Originally Posted by CRANIAL_MIND

needs a new title

Yeah, 'Blitzkrieg' was my other idea.