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Old 14-05-2006, 17:43   #1 (permalink)

 
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a remake of an old lifeshade song called monosyllabic. this one, surprisingly, is also called monosyllabic.

http://gcguide.co.uk/audio/monosyllabic.mp3
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I am liking this song, is it a Dear John song?
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i think it will be, soon. once we hash out some vocals for it.
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Mm.. this is a really cool track- has someting nin about it near the end.. wonder what vocals you will do?
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Wasn't sure what to expect, but I like it. Kinda reminds me of Soundgarden sort of.
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Sounding exciting.....get out of the computer and onto the stage....needing to see some decent bands before I leave this place. What sort of vocals do you envisage over this. Would be the make it or break it point for me.

My only criticsm (if you can call it so) is that is sounds like it was sequnced in Linux and not a nice quality Windows Application! What gave me that idea?!?!

EDIT: they keyboards maybe don't do so much for me as the sound flattens out here....too easy listening....try slamming in some horrible sounding Juno synth.....might not work but should keep the feel discordant
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i did worry that it was getting a bit pansy like towards the end. hopefully the vocals will help define the song, i need to get calum over to growl disdainly over everything, that'll sure as fuck make it miserable!
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really cool track, good job.
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Old 26-05-2006, 06:19   #9 (permalink)
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Nice, very nice, but dont go ruining it with growling vocals!

The softer ending makes for a nice contrast to the more doom laden first half.
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I'm only listening through speakers, because my headphones won't quite reach the back of the pc.
None the less, i can't hear any bad quality through them.
And yes, vocals would definatly give the song definition, so as it has been stated, be good to choose wisely.
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