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Old 15-09-2005, 21:00   #1 (permalink)

 
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This is a new track I'm working on at the moment, have a listen and please feel free to post any comments/suggestions/thoughts.

http://gridlock.ath.cx/gridlock--hea...es-preview.mp3
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Old 15-09-2005, 21:51   #2 (permalink)

 
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Thats pretty good. I enjoyed the drums .........would be interested to hear what it sounded like at a more up-tempo speed
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i really like that. not usually my cup of jack but i hella liked it.

downloaded for further listenage.

i like the vox, they seem to flow through the song.
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It would be better with an ending that wasnt so sudden and the vocals really need to be rerecorded.

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It would be better with an ending that wasnt so sudden and the vocals really need to be rerecorded.

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yes because of the fact that you had pro engineers and techs with 35 years experience apeice
and a professional singer who once filled in for aretha franklin in a tour in '89. im shocked
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yes because of the fact that you had pro engineers and techs with 35 years experience apeice
and a professional singer who once filled in for aretha franklin in a tour in '89. im shocked
I dont see anything wrong with what I said, the vocals don't quite fit (the tune has been fit around the vocals and the timings slightly off at points) and would need to be rerecorded for a proper release. The ending thing is a personal opinion.

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The timing is off on everything that lassie does though.

Still, I liked it!
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The timing is off on everything that lassie does though.

Still, I liked it!
Not quite everything, to be fair, but a fair amount

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Old 16-09-2005, 07:52   #9 (permalink)

 
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very bland and uninspiring, heard it all a thousand times before done much better.a slick(ish) production does not cover the fact its going nowhere.background dance music at its most boring.i got a bigger kick from the leftover wine from last night i just drank.

ultimately pointless, and not really worth finishing i'd say.
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Give that the original track is a folk song about lesbian sex in a small town, I'm not really surprised...
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