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Originally Posted by SpanishArmada
There's a difference between Irvine Welsh and the above. It's a trashy joke-story that's attempting to be edgy, but just seems really juvenile ('course, maybe the careless shift in tenses is what really bugged the teacher...)
The lesson is... don't trust people on the internet. Except me  |
Get a grip, its for a higher NAB (I pressume), of course its going to be fucking juvenile!.
I did notice a wee bit of "Filth" at the start blatantly nicked.
I remeber I wrote a story in standard grade which ended with a BOOM!, thats juvenile!