Yo.
I like it, but definitely room for improvement.
'Really like those synths that take over now and again; maybe a breakdown section with just those?
Bass is awesome, as is the bass drum and snare.
The bit where the synths and singing cut out like a strobe before the instrumental section and then onto the bit around 2:14 - 2:22 is the best bit for me.
Percussion is all good. Not so mad on the vocal track, but that is mostly due to the monotone styling of the artist and not your treatment of it which is good, but could maybe be glitchier.
You kept it quite consistent and it has a nice ending.
Look forward to MK2.
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