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Originally Posted by u70jc
I quite like this song, it strikes me as something along the same lines as Jose Gonzales. I can picture this kind of track being used for an ad or on a TV programme, and I mean that in a good way. The song definately sets a mood. You have a really good sense of rhythm, the drums and guitar never lose a beat, well done.
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The song is about being pursued by a vampire, so I don't think it's especially suitable for any advert, unless it's a plaster commercial
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Originally Posted by u70jc
I like that you recorded the guitar and vocals on one track and put in a bit of reverb, it really adds to the feel of the song. However, I think you could do with a recording of the vocals overlapping the vocal/guitar line, just to give the vocals a slightly crisper sound, and so the words are a bit clearer. I also think you should consider adding a few more layers towards the end of the song, so that you gather a sense of momentum towards the end, so the sudden finish that you have would be more pronounced.
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The idea of overdubbing the vocals is something I'll probably adopt. Thanks for the kind words and suggestions.