[Frosty Jack]

Originally Posted by Stripey

I wrote another track this afternoon, with a very dark feel to it, to suit the shitty weather.
Enjoy. (2.5mb mp3)

http://www.neuscan.com/stripey--neurotoxin.mp3 (right click and save target as...to download)

The bass line that comes in at 1min sounds off-key to me. Is it a definite note, or a multi-frequency hum kinda thing? Doesn't quite sit, anyway. This one would sound great with a key change. Stick in a 7th chord somewhere, and modulate. Go on, give it a go...